tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072230707282512737.post1414550295101267557..comments2018-04-02T22:34:45.268-04:00Comments on My Thought Orchard: Fate of the GringetChrishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/08956883709796129538noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072230707282512737.post-11867600280324362922011-02-14T22:53:53.148-05:002011-02-14T22:53:53.148-05:00My favorites: chuv-warmed krommy. that blummed and...My favorites: chuv-warmed krommy. that blummed and glowed but dimly. filuvent dust. Fun to read aloud!Laurahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02341617446421878270noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072230707282512737.post-49475069835781308372011-02-14T21:49:34.022-05:002011-02-14T21:49:34.022-05:00Thanks for the input! I'll revisit this one, o...Thanks for the input! I'll revisit this one, or maybe another like it, and see if I can improve.<br />No, the verification words didn't make it into the Gringet poem, but that's a really good idea for next time.Chrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08956883709796129538noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072230707282512737.post-13792290574199562542011-02-14T00:14:29.422-05:002011-02-14T00:14:29.422-05:00I like the way the words sound and roll around, bu...I like the way the words sound and roll around, but I'm not sure what I should be imaginingTinahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07313166449588435614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072230707282512737.post-21632589760483478152011-02-13T22:54:28.944-05:002011-02-13T22:54:28.944-05:00Hey, we just had to type in one of those encrypted...Hey, we just had to type in one of those encrypted image passwords. Did you get all your madeup words from those things?Sarah Chowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12286258408297169900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072230707282512737.post-85115641032477640062011-02-13T22:53:50.125-05:002011-02-13T22:53:50.125-05:00The words sound really great. It has a beautiful t...The words sound really great. It has a beautiful tone. <br />But I am a bit confused: I think it has a few too many invented words and not enough English for us to be able to build a mental picture. <br />We like the end better--from about 'Tis said..., to the end. That has some very cool imagery. <br />Nicely done! Great creativity. We can hear the Tolkien and Carroll.<br />-Love, Sarah and RobertSarah Chowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12286258408297169900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6072230707282512737.post-3966051807299031432011-02-08T21:51:15.651-05:002011-02-08T21:51:15.651-05:00Oooooh! I like it!Oooooh! I like it!Mettahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07588441677778524577noreply@blogger.com